Final Critique: Tutorials II

The critiques I got on my final pieces were that they did not need to be made on canvas and that the logos did not have to be there. I agree with the first criticisms as these pieces were first conceptualized in a digital space, and the perfect copy+paste bottles looked really nice and clean but doing these on canvas made the imperfections of the stamp and ink come out and I think that gave it a different, harsher tone which I very much liked. I also wanted to add the logos in a way to call out the beer companies that earn so much revenue despite their products being harmful and abusable. I also received critique on my placement of the pieces and that more flow was needed in their arrangement. I don't understand what that means quite yet but I agree that I need to learn how to better arrange my pieces. I was also suggested to think about animating them and I think I am going to follow up on that idea, I want to animate GIFs of my work and somehow display them on screens, as if they were moving painting or digital art displayed as such.